Audience feedback of rough cut

We are finally close to finishing our music video 'Superman' by Behind Bad Luck, there are just minor adjustments which need to be make. This will be done in our media lesson tomorrow so our video will fully completed this week! thank God. One of our media teachers and two of our class members have had a look a look at our rough cut and made some interesting comment which we act on as much as we can. One of the comments made was regarding one of the scene in London when we are dancing in Westminster Bridge about 2:50 into the video. It was highlighted that we needed more alternating shots as there was just a long footage of that one scene for about 50 seconds which was why we wrote 'Placeholder' across the footages which we're looking to change. Our audience watching this rough cut said the long footage "Killed the ending a bit" because it made the video drag and look dull. In light of the comment we will alternate the shots to another location such as the band performance scene. This will make the minute or so of the video just as engaging as the rest of the video with the variety of shots well will look to add. Furthermore, at the beginning of the video after watching it back a few times we realised that the wind from the background when Tom was sitting on the swing made that short footage sound very unprofessional and mediocre. In our next editing session we will mute this sound so that it blends in more with the other footages which are followed after the part with Tom sitting on the swings. Another element which was spotted in our rough cut is a moment in the video near to the end were the lip syncing is off. It was good that this was spotted as we did not even notice it, now that we are aware of this we will act on it tomorrow when editing, this should be a minor amendments as all we will have to do is move the sound track. Apart from these improvement aspects all of our viewers overall commented that our video was very "Interesting to watch" with "Good humour". Such comments was a relief as it reassured me that all of our efforts filming and editing wise have gone to good use.